Wednesday, 11 November 2009

first draft of story

I went to Disneylandq last year. I went on a really scary ride that I almost peed
my pants.
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  1. Miki11 November 2009 at 21:57

    I didn't but a cute girl saw me and asked me to go with her to "The Tunnel of Love".

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  2. DongHwi11 November 2009 at 22:02

    In the tunnel of Love, the girl hit me and threw me into the water for no reason.

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  3. Cool12 November 2009 at 21:37

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  4. Anonymous12 November 2009 at 21:43

    I didn't know how to swim so I screamed for the help

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  5. Tina____13 November 2009 at 17:38

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  6. B15 November 2009 at 21:44

    The girl shock her head quickly and asked me, " Why are in there?" I was so scared that she couldn't remember anything.

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  7. Tina____15 November 2009 at 21:47

    then Tevin became MR.Pee

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  8. Multimedia Teacher Dude15 November 2009 at 22:01

    Meanwhile, as I was struggling frantically in the water, she reached out her hand to me and said,"Oh, My Gosh! What am I doing to such a nice guy like you. Here--take my hand!"

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  9. Rock-girl15 November 2009 at 22:02

    Tevin started growing a beard and it grew and grew. It grew so long that it wrapped the cute girl a thousand of times. The wrapping-the-cute-girl-with-Tevin's-long,long,long-beard had the same effect as the boa constrictor. So, the girl couldn't breathe, and died. Tevin got so mad at himself that he cried.

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